Mightier Than The Sword

I'm currently trying to design a brochure I can send out to potential clients and the images and layout are not too much of a problem but when it comes to copywriting I start to struggle. Then a very useful e-mail from a PR company dropped into my inbox. It contained 10 pointers for good copywriting. I thought it was so useful that I would share it as it might be useful to some of you at some point.
- 1. Use 'magic' words
- Some words work twice as hard as others, often through their association with emotions, pleasure and basic human needs. Examples include: 'free', 'easy', 'natural', 'solution', 'secret', 'guaranteed', 'happy', 'win'. Use them wherever you can, and you'll keep people's attention. Guaranteed!
- 2. Be direct
- Don't say, 'our clients benefit': say 'you'll benefit.' Create a dialogue with the reader; questions help.
- 3. Be conversational
- Write as you'd speak: you're selling to another person. Avoid formality where possible - so opt for 'give' instead of 'donate', 'use' instead of 'utilise'.
- 4. Keep sentences short
- A good average is 15-20 words for maximum clarity. But vary the length. For impact! Be ruthless - strip away any words which aren't punching their weight.
- 5. Benefits, benefits
- What's in it for the customer? What information do they need? What makes your offering unique? Remember: people buy benefits, not features.
- 6. Avoid jargon
- Take all of your audience with you, not just those already in the know.
- 7. Avoid clichés
- You don't want to 'open a can of worms', even if you do have 'a captive audience' and a 'cutting edge' proposition that involves a 'one-stop shop' and 'thinking outside the box'. Be original - and chances are, you'll be remembered!
- 8. Avoid negatives
- Nobody likes reading about 'work', 'hard', 'difficult', 'loss', 'fail'. Life's too short!
- 9. Use the language of your reader
- Common sense? Maybe, but it's often overlooked.
- 10. Use endorsement
- What do others think of the service/product? Third party endorsement from respected sources means instant credibility.
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October 19th, 2005 at 2:14 pmI’m in the same shows as you. Copywriting is my downfall and something I need to work on! Thanks for the tips!
October 20th, 2005 at 12:45 pmI thought of you while I was posting! Not in that way though.
October 20th, 2005 at 2:04 pmHave you two been sending pr0n to one another again?
October 20th, 2005 at 5:06 pmGet out of here with your l33t sp33k
October 20th, 2005 at 5:08 pmwhats pr0n? what do you speak of Olly?!?!?
October 21st, 2005 at 5:58 pmOh, don’t you act all innocent with me!
October 23rd, 2005 at 12:05 am